Can some one check my grammar..please? - free cartoons taxes
It is often a matter of great importance to see that the world's population has exploded, despite its size. Especially in countries like China, India and Japan are well known countries that a larger number of shares. It is assumed that overpopulation would always have side effects, experts indicate that overcrowding can lead to high levels of pollution in air, water and soil. These circumstances have, because of the lack of education has occurred in the population.
To deal with the threat that education must be assured for all possible sources, which makes a direct communication with people around the world. For the pictorial representation of the youngest child of television could convey the message to young people and education could be attributed to the disposal of Addresse. If the government grants may offer people chosen to do more research on the issue.
Organize governments and other bodies as bodies begin to address the threat. This can be through higher taxes or fines on people waiting for the units in their family will be performed at home. Smaller parts of the family might be useful to say tax deductions for certain selected issues.
While concentrating on the membership of a family unit, have different laws and in practice to control the problem. This may be more to countries with higher population figures today. A scheme such as the ban on smoking in public health standards, according to well-controlledDS at home and free distribution of leaflets broadly with the question.
Although this seems a difficult task to educate the public about overpopulation. This must be executed immediately, before the world with traumatic events in the years could come to the edge.
Friday, February 12, 2010
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It is often a problem to see that the world population is increasing in intensity. Particularly well known in countries like China, India and Japan, there are a greater number of shares. It is believed that the excessive lead the population to adverse effects, experts indicate that excessive levels of pollution, lead in air, water and soil. These circumstances have, because of the lack of education has occurred in the population.
ReplyDeleteTo overcome this problem, the need to ensure education for all possible sources in direct communication with people around the world. In young children, can transfer the message to the television cartoons (reporting that the need could be attributed to the accuracy) and for young people in education to solve the problem. Governments should, where possible schoselected media people to do more research on the issue.
Governments and other institutions should take the initiative to tackle the problem. This can be through higher taxes or fines on people who are waiting for units in their family home are to be carried out. Smaller parts of the family may offer advantages such as tax deductions for expenditure on selected secure.
While concentrating on the membership of a single family unit, all other laws must pass to gain control over the problem. This may be more to countries with higher population figures today. Laws like the ban on smoking in public, the introduction of standards and sanitary control at home and free distribution of brochures on the subject in general.
Finally, although it seems a difficult task to educate the public about the overpopulation. This must be executed immediately, before the world with traumatic events in the years could come to the edge.
The last paragraph should be longer and the Word of advice, if you write a check condition 3 big ideas in his introduction to affirm in the following paragraph 3, the same ideas in other words, because I do not want to repeat the same thing over and over again, and finally, to support their ideas with examples or at least 2 or 3 to begin his closing address to the last, and then design for the last time, believe me, I'm in school and I am a great writer.
Paragraph 1: You need a comma to India .. You will need a period after effects .. You need a comma after water
ReplyDeleteParagraph 3: You need a comma after the main .. Ability to change .. can remove the word "for" before training
Paragraph 4: You need a comma after the family ..
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Ughh. I read that people "in the world is rising in the first paragraph and realized that he was his report. What do you know think we're stupid?
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I believe that everything is ready. (I see nothing wrong.
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